PMD: WoL Cover

The collaboration is just amazing...just..amazing. I mean, you made it quite superb. Seriously.

Congrats to the creators of this comic. Knowing that its not finished yet, I know better to not make a critique but since you have it here, might as well share up on my opinions regarding this series.

Okay, here are some top pointers and judgment from pokefuturemarsh.

1. I adore your main characters (a Quilava and a Grovyle..). They make a great set of opposing team. And also, I've seen the literary part of this story. It is hard to digest, but is still interesting. Really good for me since you draw Quilava rather well. I have to say that there are a few weakness for Quilava's designs. The fire isn't exactly comfortable for me to watch in the title. As for Grovyle, you drew it in a super advanced stage. Really amazing and really impressive. The shadows, the pictures and the image is sooo good! I'm complimenting you here. Really!

2. The background is not bad, I can see that the grass is drawn well and the path is indeed quite impressive. I can't say anymore about it though since its simple all-in-all.

3. The title is the main reason why I give the originality a 3/5 mark. Its good I guess and even I use different texts and use the title from the pokemon franchise as well. So I'm not going to criticize about it that much.

I know you're not finished with it, but I'm happy for you for doing this story. And I'm confident you'll finish it with a great ending. Keep up the good work.